Floyd Skloot's first substantial collection reads like an autobiography: section
one concentrates on memories of a difficult childhood, in which both parents are
sharply characterized; then follow poems about being a parent himself (including
some feelings every father or mother will recognize in "Hazards"); thirdly, work
dealing with the onset of his illness, Chronic Fatigue Syndrome; and finally, poems
that cling to the shores of experience-seascapes, glimpses of a beyond, and at
least one death. This makes for a very satisfactory one-hundred-page book, yet
there is no compromising of individual poems.
I very much enjoy Music Appreciation, its quietness, gentleness and-as one might
hope from a collection with that title-genuine music. These are intelligent poems
that wear their learning lightly and carry their emotional equipment unhistrionically.
Skloot chooses plain subjects from the domestic scene so beloved of late
twentieth-century poets (and so neglected in former centuries), but to this he brings
an aloof lyricism, where the witty images, the taut playing of line against line, never
divert the direct flight of his syntax. "Old Stories"-about the "second decade of
marriage"-is typical. It ends with an image of a book, not a literary quotation:
Forty approaches.
It is the time apart, not
the time together. It is loose
skin, the six-mile run after work.
No papers
and sweet rolls Sunday
mornings. It is the tin
anniversary,
new wrinkles in old
stories, the text
hand-set and stitched, not perfect bound.
He will no doubt be labelled a formalist, for he is highly sensitive to the shapes
words make on the page and to the sculpting of his themes. To me, that just means
he is a good poet: and he is thus able to tackle highly emotional situations with
the necessary restraint. He does not make an issue of rhyme, but he can use it with
lyric simplicity (Giftsong) and once or twice to devastating effect (see Brain Scan).
His sestina is less successful just because he is no rhetorician and this is essentially
a declamatory form. He also has a tendency to let single words drop off the end of one
line into the next, which can look like the poet conveniently catching a rhyme word:
"The great blue heron that once nested where / Balch Creek rushes down will fly over
me / again, aroused by my being there so / early, knowing what I have come to know."
But he is a splendidly modest sonneteer-no bombast, just a natural feel: look at My
Daughter Considers Her Body or Sonatina for Surf and Sandpiper, for example. There
is also a sense of propriety rare in American poetry when he writes about sex. Yet it
is unmistakably Eros dancing the Sapphire Fandango, which begins: "We mastered the
azure / fandango / early in our marriage . . ." and-in imagery that is witty and
passionateÑgoes on to use the various shades of blue to follow the "deep blue movement"
of married love.