Commentary on Poems:
I wrote "The Meadow" after a student lecture at Bennington College
which focused on the way art is characterized by an sense of terror and
violence in relation to beauty. The lecturer, Kathy Nilsson, showed a clip
from Tarkovsky's The Mirror of soldiers marching through shallow water,
some carrying remains of the dead. The camera's gaze is relentless; one
half-naked soldier is ruthlessly exposed. My friend Mike said about the
clip and about the subject of Nilsson's lecture, "You can't look away."
"Freefall" was inspired by the poetry of Joe Bolton, who committed suicide
and offers hints of it throughout his work. I'd characterize my piece
as a "pseudocidal" poem--that is, I was not considering suicide myself
but was interested in the human desire for oblivion. The "poet waving from
the brink" refers to John Berryman who, according to a witness, waved at
a passerby as he leapt to his death from a bridge. In subsequent revisions
of the poem, I substituted the word "brink" for "bridge."