Author’s Commentary

Keith Tuma

 

“February” is a poem—I guess it’s that—that I wrote with the idea of performing it in Paris at the Pound conference.  As it happens, I never did perform it there, opting for other things and knowing that cris cheek was to be there and that we’d thus be able to trot out our sendup of the Starr Report, “Oval Orifice,” which we’d performed before together and separately, and one version of which appeared in Open Letter some years ago.   Most of what little I write of late—I mean apart from criticism and scholarship—follows the pattern of “February” in being written for specific performances in specific sites.  One thing that means is that less and less do I feel bound to anything like “poetry” as a form or genre.  Much of what I write also follows “February” in beginning with found materials I try to work and rework until they are something else.  “February” began with my simply copying down the first or last—I forget which—line of every poem in that fat anthology of French poetry in translation Paul Auster edited some years ago.  I started moving and mixing and mashing and cutting and pasting and rejecting and rewriting text and halfway through that process I stumbled upon an article about the revolutionary calendar I mention at the head of the poem and the text suddenly morphed into something about that—the last thing I’d wanted it to do really, as I despise poems that are about paintings or art or seem to be about them.  Holy baloney, I thought, I’m doing something that a 50s poet or a Jorie Graham might do.  No thanks!  But I went ahead with it anyway because there was something about the stanza I was working in that interested me. 

 

I’ve attached just a few other samples of recent work here below.  The first one plays with a couple of texts by men named John, including the most famous John and John Searle and so on and has to do with ideas of consciousness and worldliness and peace.  It had no occasion for a long time until I found one after Peter Middleton read a paper about poetry and science. The key in getting toward it for me was discovering what my own surname refers to in trobiander myth according to—who is it—maybe Malinowski..  The next two, part of an ongoing sequence as excerpted in _Poetry Salzburg_, are performance texts; these I’ve read lots of places though I mean them to be a kind of homage to the great Scottish poet Tom Leonard, who dies this kind of thing so much better than I do.  The last bit here is just a fragment of a book-length collaborative project written with cris cheek and Bill Howe.  It’s the proem to _Critical Path:  Into the Bush__ More from that book will be available soon we hope, including is multimedia elements.  It’s a kind a of successor to “Oval Orifice” in being a collaborative text aimed at a political moment, and hopefully it’s the precursor of more to come by way of collaborative writing with these two very tall friends of mine.

 

 

 

Afterjohn

 

 

Acolytian thumb give way to panic anodyne, understand your radio button risks seizure, lonely enough to be a little rubbery while your answer sucks the life of goodness.  Only going nowhere enclosed in enervating folly spirit dark to itself is not spirit,  the sole province of this pathology.  Cutting back sensors elapsed an otiose note grown as oblation requiring raving it quelled.  What celestial mad dog foams, we wondered, ignominious febrific breath assaying rounds of mirth and charging salubrious toil and recreative catastrophe? Registers burlesqued circulate in the dawnless disavowed obedience of that pencil self; it’s neither here nor there but the constraint may be the size of the answer, not the computation itself, if we provide an adjustment knob specifying desired length of tour and input the ordering of crushed thrones and pulped cherubim. Allusions to a circle-jerk delimit a failed delivery as we suspend origin and weakly link incarnations--the genetics of the process belong to another essay whose victims lift their dying gaze after the interregnum has been cancelled and the ineffable shows up all digits and defiant dexterity. You and whose army the midget squealed to appropriate historic transformations of human nature, image and body in zones no longer separated, but I was far too late turning when something swished and went out like a light.  Swanky boots when you’re in them but underneath meaning,  ironed in the phosphorous sizzle, aloof and shook silly?   After the ordinance was delivered, I awoke as the name for paradise in a crank study of TrobiANDers and troubaDOORS.  Sinuous, uncertain, and yet invariable in stupor’s trajectory,  the obstinate declaration unclenched another spasm, no ejection button at hand.  I was determined to insert the data while you whistled “Won’t you come home Bill Bailey” but it matters hardly at all that we were unable to murmur--it’s not as if you leave everything as you find it in the corpus colossum.  The direction of fit is null but consciousness is like my toes sis, cortical layers, quarks and muons presumptuous. Let’s not get bogged down in epiphenomenalism and obsolete causalities.  You take an irreducible subjective element into the willowy breeze capless and complain of a cold red nose.  I propose a supplement to perfection I hereby name halo.  Afterwards, the dispute: the world itself cannot contain it.

 

 

 

 

 

from Beamish

 

            for and after Tom Leonard

 

 

1.

 

 

it's a bit rich it's pretty pathetic

it won't hold water really weak a travesty

pie in the sky not my cup of tea piss poor

it's not like they expect me to buy that

 

what a mess totally total shit

laughable actually laughable

it's just how to say this just godawful

useless like they really expect me to buy it

 

disgusting wouldn't be the word no

look it's not like i was born yesterday

it's not like i just fell off a turnip truck

some kind of peckerwood yahoo

 

like they say he's been doin' poppers give him a sniff of this

like i was the moron who would take it seriously

good god good god i'm disappointed in them

expected something thought they'd take the time

 

altogether vacuous it's got no content empty

it won't hold up it won't not for a second

it won't pull its weight it's pretty weak not a chance

spectacular flop a disaster for sure a loser

 

but don't get me wrong about it now

don't take it personally it's not personal

i'd endorse it if there was anything to it

i would but there's nothing to it nothing in it

 

i would it's not there's not anything else

it's as if the whole milieu is swiss cheese

it's not like there's anything else something worth it

it's not like there's a whole lot happening there

 

i guess they've got their own thing going

i guess everybody could give a damn i guess

well they'll do it like they damn well please

they'll do it like they were gonna do it anyway

 

and this isn't gonna help them one bit

they could use the help damn but this isn't it

only it's something they're not gonna get

they want to get it while the gettin's good

 

get out while the gettin's good that is

but it's fishy something just ain't right

it can't work it won't work it really smells

stinks it's not for me not not  for me no

 

god i don't mean to be disappointing

no don't get me wrong about this please

i'm just saying that i call them like i see them

i see them and call them like i see them

 

then it's not like i'm just any kind of fool

it's not like i'm trying to be an asshole

it's not like they haven't seen this kind of thing

this kind of thing before you know

 

they've been through it they can tell you

tell you where to put it then it's weird

it's like they could give a flying fuck

and that's an imaginative way to describe it

 

hardly seems worth a word like flyingfuck

not that i have experience mind you

i won't have it i simply won't have it

it's bollocks dumb stupid to think otherwise

 

my head and a hole in the ground no thank you

they must think i'm gonna take it anyway

oh it's brilliant brilliant alright

a regular mystery anyway forget it

 

 

2.

 

well it’s

well it’s

 

nah

naw

hadn’t even thought about it

 

but if

but if

sure

 

load of crap frankly

that’s

that’s

 

sure

god no

pretty much the gist of it

pretty near it anyway

 

yeah

yeah

sure

SURE

 

and I’m the Pope

 

*

 

the pap maybe

there’s a word

 

old paps

big paps

friggin androgynous

 

anyway

anyway

not for me no

 

not even a question

 

jerks mostly

most of ‘em

most of ‘em

 

blighted I think

 

hardly their fault

 

just the way it is

pretty much just the way it is

 

right

yeah

right

 

more than halfway through maybe

 

*

 

course it might change

suppose it’s possible

yeah

yeah

 

yeah

you’d think

but take a look at it

 

damn near killed me

didn’t think I’d live to see it

 

uh-uh

uh-uh

 

*

 

we’ll see

yeah we’ll see

 

we’ll see alright

 

not that you will mind you

 

plenty of it

plenty of it so

 

not a clue

 

pop it once

pop it once with your fist

 

 

*

 

 

from Critical Path

 

 

As if from a fore-time of heedless incongruity, the following words present palled stones the perpetual War will never make fertile. Vacant imperatives, nonce notes rear-ended by event, they fly now on feathers of the cancelled interregnum like birds into horizon, rupture in beak. Ever the mascot of institutional regimes, clinically grisly if seraphic in concentration, your editor takes to this spellbound text like colonoscopy to colon—viewing while rooting, backlit in the laboratories of the lesser idols, perspiring in uniform. Here were nods and nodes, Cells clicked on-Line for conversations steaming like the lungs of carrier pigeons.  Where clot is, once was gush. The spigot hammered; the taps shut. If the past can’t escape thumbs of nostalgia, no matter: we are already screwed. Pinch us why don’t you.

 

Neither Zoroastrians nor Mohammed’s uncle have record of the Cast of Residual Crass to disappear ahead. They might have been Tweedledee and Tweedledum beside themselves, spun out to cruise continent in an auto wired up ducks for echt dictation. One came on jetwise in a dog-flap cap flushed from AngleLand, his beige fleece standard issue, period golden age, rife with ‘Revelation’ zips. Wasted and backtannoy-steeled, he was handled Fried Pudding, shadow mover with the name-bearing instruments, carrying his can of propositions and box of dirt. There was beyond him but nearing Bowling Bill his other to meet, rarely silent under black leather stinking hat and lanky Pontiac, conch cowboy of an illegitimate power. In search of peroration these two travelogued out of Ohio through Kentucky truckers unto and into Tennessee wheezing toward the BUYYOU and New Orleans swinging west for the rocks THIS IS CODE and computers of Lubbock. Bill had a bowling ball. Pudding had a bottle and what all. They did roll along with an occasional song. Their mission: suture a ‘truth breaks’ Sutra.  Ferret out of the Bush something to turn the prows eyeless. Theirs was to be the dirt re-seeded. It proved unnecessary. This residue and frame considered part of the spent unwashed, that which blows in winds when change promotes greater expectoration.

 

The ‘transparent towers at dusk’ proem you could wish it off.  You will not. I shall dutifully transcribe from tapes and notes this other Path WITH US OR AGAINST US. It began with something innocuous somewhere off the map in Tennessee. . .  .